Написал Markywa 08.01.2021 at 07:26

That's simple.
Good editing = great video and a great sense of tempo. Keep it up!

Написал Madfield 08.01.2021 at 20:07

Все эти фишечки монтажные не могут не доставлять, да. М/в зачетное. Автор растет в техническом плане. Это хорошо. Но я не увидел ни драмы, ни истории, ни хоть сколько-нибудь связного повествования. Это плохо. 4.

Написал okhostok 21.07.2020 at 04:35

Написал MrAuditore96 21.07.2020 at 04:35

did you mean dark as in "negative" and light as in "positive"?

It is my personal taste, that really does not matter. It is just about dark and bright colors used there. For me, strong bright and dark contrasts are the things that give me most striking impression. To be specific, when after bright scenes suddenly comes dark, I like it - destruction of light. Or vice versa (it can also be said about negative/positive).
In your clip bright and dark scenes are mostly ordered by parts, it seems like you are holding yourself, it is not that chaotic and striking. However, in general, it is better not to be chaotic. )

Написал MrAuditore96 21.07.2020 at 04:35

Now, while I know that the fact that I need to explain things means that I have not presented things clearly enough, I still decided to say this because I want you to know what my vision was.

I appreciate this. Now I understood better.

About story, I would have liked to see this not in 'action mode', but in 'dramatic mode', like slower pace, close-up of emotions of the characters, other song choice. If you're doing in 'action mode' - you cannot give a lot of information about characters. The most common approach for this is:
cause/reason -> some action -> result/consequence.
In 'dramatic mode', it is:
first cause/reason -> first result/consequence -> cause that is gained from first result/consequence -> build-up -> culmination -> final result/consequence.
You are doing 'action mode' story in dramatic approach, which is wrong. Hope I was clear.
BTW, I enjoyed your Gaksital x Naruto, I showed it to my friends, they also appreciated this).

Написал Anejo 08.01.2021 at 13:27

Yeah I meant Korean drama movies, where most of the heroes looks like a fashion models or boysband members
That just breaks my suspension of disbelief for the plot and etc.
But sure I'm just biased on that, I can give that movie a try)

Да нормуль они в полном метре выглядят. В Корее как раз криминал - это топовый жанр в полном метре. Но такой c драмой 100% без стеба, типа "Карнавала бесчестия", не так весело, как у Японцев эпохи видеосалунов, чего мне часто и не хватает) У них там, в корейском криминале и и заросшие и небритые герои попадаются часто. Очень показательный в этом плане сериал "Голос"

Постер, конечно, подобран красиво, но это оригинальный постер с "Нарковойны", поменяли название. Думаю, автор особо этот факт не скрывал)

Если быть честными, то криминал а-ля экшен, про наркодилеров и боевку - то Китай тут явно больше дает поле для клипания. Корея - это все равно кровушка ради кровшуки и драма ради драмы. Если бы и взялась клипать, то только на Гонконг-Китай начиная с нулевых. А то вот опять же, какие-то герои излишне галмурны.


I just belive in Сhineeze action more, than in Korean. And yes, I prefer the original filmed in 2013. But still good presentation. Among weeknesses: some important frames were to short (for a story), instead of pointing characters (1:10), at the same time unimportant transitions like at 1:14 were too long. Why not to try moving here the hand of a cheracter with a burning paper in it? To many transitions making stress on directions are good at action, not story. And again in the ending: fast changing frames with the characters, and a very long frame with the house without any sutten meaning. I would prefer to see the face for a bit longer time with gradually lowering exposure. Etc

Good luck at cont)

Написал Freeman-47 12.01.2021 at 14:50

Отличнейшая работа с невероятной атмосферой, которая накрыла меня с головой