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I like this musician and I have considered using this position for some of my own works but I just have not gone in around to finishing any of them since I found this musician around 6 months ago. granted I have never heard this song from the musician so I was definitely curious to see how this goes.
first of all thank you for explaining what is going on in the background. it really helped, definitely for a English speaker like me. (for the music I had the English translation right next to me but it helped definitely for the dialogue portions)
that mask scene really cemented the lyric perfectly right before the chorus and it just kept going from there. it began good (even before the mask, that was just when did the best scene I was already wondering how it would be done when searching up the translation) and it just kept being good. your message between childhood tails and grown-up reality was shown really well.
I had trouble understanding the final verse and why we ended up in underworld with the characters of underworld. honestly a part of me wonders if it was a last minute edit to fill up a quick portion of time that there was not enough for. (I have guiltily done that once or twice, usually last day) I can think of a few possible things the best being maybe it was supposed to be the grown-up type of shows moving away from the kid style but again my own guesses and too much of one for me to use in in the ratings) but maybe you ran of source material and you just need him to be saved or something.(I do recognize you were using movies instead of TV shows and from my own experience you usually run out of footage very quickly when using movies. overall I am rating it very high still because I really enjoyed it.
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this one at least is better done than the last one. granted the last one had a really low standard. even though I am aware I am a editor that has lower rating, at least in relation to how long I have been doing this , I think people would have thought this weird in 2006 beyond the machination crowd. and I mean a very specific machination crowd, mostly Sims. (I did read some of this before I saw the second half for the video at around the 1 minute mark or in likely would have been smoother, but I think the spirit is still the same) at least it got better after the 1 1/2 minute point. you finally got your rhythm at that point.I actually like the idea that you came up with using the video game for putting room scenes. that is actually genius. but you need to get some other sources for the characters if you want to go far. you did a good job for her doing the dance and this time the walking scene was more fluid. I also have to say the way you made the transparent double Lauras was perfect to add to the 'thriller' feel.
you definitely needed to do a crossphase or tradition zoom in for some of the zoom in face scenes (which were too blunt and choppy, specifically for that type of shot) on the first dance sequence. (granted there is a portion of me that wonders if when you made this video you knew of the existence of the crossphase setting, being self taught in the beginning I do you know you figure out that type of stuff when you press the button somewhere you either did not realise or was curious when you read the label) in theory if you were good enough you could use the video game character engine but you would have to be skilled enough to hide all of the lag either with putting it faster, hiding flaws, cutting ,trying to make it stylistic. like I said you have potential if you do it right but just keep mine this is not a machination audience. but I do you think your style can fit to make sure the characters are moving without us having to think. because of how far are you went between the last two videos I gave you a 3.
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Написал Василий 15.05.2025 at 17:49
Написал Bean 15.05.2025 at 17:49
I did like some of the spinning and angles for "by night". particularly at 1 minutes 10 seconds. problem is that it went for 20 more seconds where it should have ended 5 to 8 seconds later. We should have seen more of the man as well as the lady. it has potential but this is poorly executed overall. you relied on tricks that are supposed to supplement five seconds for 30 to 45 seconds. you also should have sped up the walking in the percentage meter rather than letting the clip go naturally since obviously the video game was made during a time where there was limited animation speed. if you split it up it we have gifted you print not just tolerable but nice.
also "тр" is confusing wait to display tomb raider, it took me 10 to 15 minutes to figure it out even though I recognize the character I thought maybe it was a close rip off seeing that the name was not listed as tomb raider but as something else. and even if you did this singular I could understand but you put the abbreviation in the middle of it explaining sentence to make even more confusing.
Перевод переводчиком выдает лютую бурду. Если без перевода,то я не четко понял,о чем речь. "Тр" - это норм для нас,русских на счет сокращения этой игры. У итд... Че распинаться то тут.
The use of the abbreviation is not the problem on its own. The problem is the abbreviation is in the middle of a sentence (with most of the sentence not being the game's name) I understand trying to print little clarification and have done that myself a few times but best to put that on the side. (I personally use parentheses but I am sure there are other ways) or at the very least have it instead 'На основе 'тр' игры.' to indicate separation.
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I did like some of the spinning and angles for "by night". particularly at 1 minutes 10 seconds. problem is that it went for 20 more seconds where it should have ended 5 to 8 seconds later. We should have seen more of the man as well as the lady. it has potential but this is poorly executed overall. you relied on tricks that are supposed to supplement five seconds for 30 to 45 seconds. you also should have sped up the walking in the percentage meter rather than letting the clip go naturally since obviously the video game was made during a time where there was limited animation speed. if you split it up it we have gifted you print not just tolerable but nice.
also "тр" is confusing wait to display tomb raider, it took me 10 to 15 minutes to figure it out even though I recognize the character I thought maybe it was a close rip off seeing that the name was not listed as tomb raider but as something else. and even if you did this singular I could understand but you put the abbreviation in the middle of it explaining sentence to make even more confusing.
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you did a good job showing war is it pure desperation without glorifying it which actually made the heroes committee even more impactful but You were still able to separated enough from it going in the other direction. Great job.
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You did a decent job, the song I think it does fit.
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Perfect, you got the feel correctly.
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Great
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loved this, great seamless transitions.
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you got a lot going, the only issue is that we had the scene in which she walks down the street at the end of the first chorus is just too long. (in other areas it was short enough to stand) so I had to deduct a half a point from my original score. granted I love this seamless transition.
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Написал Frilene 12.03.2025 at 16:04
неплохая подборка магии, но уж больно как-то всё быстро и сумбурно, не успеваешь проникнуться кадрами и атмосферой
The portion after Voldemort was pretty good.(The beginning has some major flaws but I am going to skip over that) problem is this track is really bad. it is just generic music which makes it hard for me to get invested is it. granted I feel like you are going to go far with those skills considering how seamless some of the transitions were so good luck for the future.
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Написал Илья Чижов 05.12.2024 at 21:07
Хм. Комментарии куда-то испарились...
Короче, вам просто НЕОБХОДИМО погрузиться в матчасть. Если вы действительно хотите стать лучше и готовы вливать в клипмейкинг человеческий ресурс, во-первых, поработайте над качеством исходников. Небрежно закодированная работа из материала взятого из первого найденного источника чести не делает и воспринимается сразу по-любительски и на уровне базы ютюба. Это не то к чему стоит стремиться имхо. По поводу структуры клипов и синхры. Да, есть достаточно хороших моментов, но очень многое выглядит также недотянутым и "сырым". Это нормально в первых работах, но насколько я понял, вы клИпаете давно и на ютюбе также уже немало роликов сделали. Так что и спрос уже немного иной.
Каждое следующее упоминание собственного таланта и просьбы не судить строго уже не воспринимается хорошо, тут уже надо работать. Если вам кажется, что работа в порядке и можно её публиковать и вы сомневаетесь - скиньте на бета-тест автору который вам нравится. Люди тут в основном адекватные и от души помогают друг другу не смотря на кажущуюся жесткость. У меня в частности в начале пути были простые и сложные конфликты с кучей авторов, но в процессе участия в конкурсах и общения сегодня я могу назвать ряд этих людей Друзьями.
Тут действительно очень отзывчивое и доброе сообщество, пусть и немногочисленное сегодня. В частности, потому что это крайне трудозатратное хобби которое многим взрослым людям стоит значительной части личной жизни и психического комфорта )
В общем, меньше слов и больше дела. Учите матчасть, работайте над деталями, становитесь лучше и всё будет хорошо.
this is a good one. granted I did give a slightly better score because you mentioned that. you did good sync work. I thought the fridge was good and the sound,well I listen to this on the phone speaker (since I am on the go and I was checking on something else) but this specific website takes quality of video I love more than even his sister site AMV news. and I mean more like 'pixelization definition' of quality not 'good editing work' definition of the word which both sites respect good editing work. that is not to say you should start getting 240p sources but most importantly your sources have to have no logo and unless you are cropping logos (which recommends a high-quality because you already shrinking the frame) those are the first priorities. and most importantly the timing signature cannot be replaced. which means if your new footage is not exactly timed like your old footage then it is actually unusable in the editing program. I think if you need to know one thing and not have to learn it the hard way it is that.
I think you did a great job keeping everything together. you did a great job making sure everything was shaped properly for the next scene.It is nice to see someone beginning because I still remember when I was. people probably find it there a little poor sport to ask for a different score than what you earned which is probably the reason for a lot of the comments the way they are. I understand where you were going but mini don't.
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amazing action,I enjoyed this greatly.
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your video is pretty confusing but I was together is just enough to make a little sense of it. I will at least give you you did a proper basic to understand ending and that is something that can be difficult at many times particularly for loser concepts. I feel like this is a video you really have to slightly explain particularly for people who might not have seen this or a search the Wikipedia page in my case. (though I searched after the fact) I did like the metaphor of glance is that it comes through nicely so I will give you that though.
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I loved how are you shown the kid inside of her. how it is like to be stuck in something. it was perfectly depicted. you show the universe correctly, great job.
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I agree, nice the contest is back to. now onto the video,I know they were action shots but they somehow felt static in many ways with not much motion or lengthening a scene (through slow motion) so much that the action is no longer felt. like the plain scene in any of the jumping scenes. grated overall it was pretty good. I am a fan of these style montages. this was mostly fixed by 1 minutes 34 seconds. Overall it was wild and I loved the intro at the beginning of the song.
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you did the multi-universe concept perfectly that you understood from the beginning that's what you were doing. I just really love this trailer with all the quick edits.
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Написал Leberate 07.11.2024 at 13:03
Написал Bean 07.11.2024 at 13:03
(at least the what either brand,station, product, whatever I skipped, the advertisement is for, preferably along with the time period it was made (in case it was used for a long time) but at least the product) I also think some of these were from music videos so that listing the music videos should have happened as well. (which would 'be some mixed advertising and music videos' if you want to go that generic, advertising is not interpreted as music video in English and usually only refers to the type of product video in the middle of shows) and this song was not listed correctly. I had a long version that was 300 words about music alone listing every reason,exception,understanding but please list remix (example 'Omnimar - Out Of My Life (remix)') if you chose a remix.
Бин?80 тебе делать нечего вместо бла бла все не так, иди лучше займись редактор изучи, интро себе придумай, а не вот это вот все. е***й рот. Zardonic Remix тут дураку понятно, с первых секунд же слышно.
I was not sure if it was the Zardonic Remix or the Oleg Xaler Remix. (I even considered that maybe the creator use a mix of both) I was originally going to list the two of them but decided for all I know they could of made their own mix or sped it up themself. (I should know from personal experience how much you can realistically do from just cropping around songs and moving it around) thank you for that confirmation.I do have an intro that I published for this contest. (it is the one with the fashion show picture)
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this was visually appealing. on the video technically I felt the liquid scene came out strange in the beginning instrumental bridge though the weakest portion was the 'black bra and Fortune Teller ball dance.' (for the black bra portion, not the fortune-telling portion which which worked nicely with the video) other than that you did a amazing job,not many can do in terms of combining different genres was without visually seamlessly. that was your best point with this video and is why it gets the good ratings it does.
granted please list your sources, even if you got them from advertisements you should still list your sources by a standard name of some sort. (at least the what either brand,station, product, whatever I skipped, the advertisement is for, preferably along with the time period it was made (in case it was used for a long time) but at least the product) I also think some of these were from music videos so that listing the music videos should have happened as well. (which would 'be some mixed advertising and music videos' if you want to go that generic, advertising is not interpreted as music video in English and usually only refers to the type of product video in the middle of shows) and this song was not listed correctly. I had a long version that was 300 words about music alone listing every reason,exception,understanding but please list remix (example 'Omnimar - Out Of My Life (remix)') if you chose a remix. if you edited this song and it did not come from a specific remix please just list that you edited the song. (this might not be smooth but this is the 6 version I wrote over the course of an hour and a half,most going into techno music of the 90s and early 2000s) going into song editing specifics would be complicated and would make this post way too long to go into. you did a great job shortening the song in a way that felt smooth and natural. I know this is very detailed but this is really standard.
in terms of the ads used some of them I did recognize particularly for the car in the techno section and it was fun to point some of them out when watching. your video gives a strictly come dancing feel. (The season opening from 2021) The magical scenes were nicely integrated in portions. I feel this should have been dancing for the song and dance lyrics 1 minute 27 seconds – 1 minute 30 seconds though the graphics were beautiful, just did not fit. granted it almost gets forgiven because of how good you did that sexy scene. I feel combining the magic with the cyberpunk would have been the best path though you did a great job with just the magic scene.
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I honestly pointing out more tiny things because of you being one of the upper creators. this is well organised and likely will be one of the top ones. it is kind of difficult to fill a 4 minute amv with a movie amount of sources, something I definitely learned within my first two years of editing. (there were a lot of other shows that I try to do uninstall with, along with another that slipped my mind) anyway you really got the journey of self discovery and trying to find out the hidden.
Написал Антаресов 31.10.2024 at 02:11
Залипательно
Это должно быть победителем
to be fair even though they were other enjoyable videos and other videos of merit, this selection probably relating to people having about 2 months max is not the usual selection. there was only seven videos so far in the closing date has passed.(maybe we got a large amount of last minute entries but still) I still have best hopes for everyone competing but it is what it is.
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Написал Муняша 13.09.2021 at 22:24
Клип показался немного затянутым, скорее всего из-за того, что он почти не зацепил. Качество разрешения видео, конечно, оставляет желать лучшего, но возможно это проблема слабого редактора. Музыка временами странно себя ведет, но сам выбор песни хороший. Успехов тебе, Bean 
I did do some slight editing to try to put the original beginning in original ending instrumental. as fine as this version was the intro and outro singing uninstalled and high pitch was not in her strong suit. (to put simply these are two different singers from two different versions) listening to the end obviously I likely did not balance the volume right for the last installed when switching tracks even though it seems that it was at least smooth and natural if the volume matched. there was a point in which I considered using the Japanese version when I first was making the video(basically the English was to be switched later so I did not have to check a translation page on the side of my screen) but as time went on I just some of the things became way too literal for a change up.
The reason it is this length is because this is the actual length of the song. Japanese songs many times run into this range as one of the average ranges. I never noticed the lengthy of this. I have to say every time I look at the length and find out it's five minutes and I mean not just this video but every video I use this song for during tech check. I get shocking say oh I must have missed put the time. probably because it has structure and there is not much instrumental time once the song starts. (actually as I am writing this I realize probably it also helps that once you take out the beginning in the end it in the same range (likely slightly longer) than a radio edit)
granted with video getting shorter and shorter this is on the longer end of the scale (definitely if you look at it to today rather than when this was made back in 2021 before Tik Tok exploded) even though I would not put the length in the ultra long category. anyway thanks for reviewing my video and everyone else.
Написал Mr.Filin 13.09.2021 at 22:24
Хоть и клип затянутый, но не понимаю почему он заслуживает такой низкой оценки, ибо видно что сделан с душой, поэтому 4
I do think this was one of my decent videos and I definitely would have like to get further in the contest and I am so grateful for you defending my video. granted I noticed you you are newer here or at least based on what I see on your profile meaning there might be some misconceptions.grading does seem to stick on the lower end (The looking around again after a few years not as much as other websites probably because of the .5 options) it is almost to 3 as of posting this though I hope it could break it.
Написал Leberate 13.09.2021 at 22:24
Классный постер, классный клиип. Талант не отнять
thanks,this means a lot.
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before I even played played the video I was excited that someone has chose this track. (I searched endlessly to see after watching a video back at akross if anyone else chose this song for a track and I found 5 at the most) I do have to say the beginning verse was rough,the concept was there but it was rough instead of fluid which I feel this song needs due to the way it's done. by the time we get to the chorus it starts the pick up, I can pick around certain things but we start seeing the video coming together. I think I have to accept this is not supposed to be an action video like W.itch for the night. by verse 2 I accepted it and began to really enjoy this. you did a good job with this source and making it work. this is getting a high rating.
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Написал aguares 13.11.2010 at 13:44
крепкой работу неназовешь, скорее всего это -просто, но со вкусом. провал динамики правоцирует то, что видео несочетается с музыкой. к видео обсолютное равнодушие.
gleban без обид и без оценки
The issue with this video is not even completely that the music did not match but the music was actually the opposite. it is one thing just to ignore the music particularly if it is in a different language but you should quickly double check to make sure there is nothing in there that completely is opposite and "everyone cares and nobody dies" does not work with this. (personal experience,glowing around the twist) granted you did edit nicely but it would probably have been best that you just looked around for a different song that somehow fit to replace it.
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this is great, in terms of what everyone is saying there are definitely a few effects (particularly the one in which the screen was moving back and forth on a black background) but most of them were fine. The only other flaw would be that piano scene which was a great touch but should have been cut 4 seconds earlier. (I would say at 14 second) but I did love this video and I do think it was better than most of the comments. (even if I understand why they were given that is standard for this contact) it just hit perfectly when in needed to and it did continuously get better which is something I do take into consideration.
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you did a amazing job, it warmed my heart.
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it is on the simpler side but it somehow works. verse 2 is my favourite.
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you did a good job putting everything in.
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you did a good job playing around with the video game theme. I enjoyed every minute of it.
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That was edited nicely. Even if it was very violent. You should have thought about saving it for a contest.
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