 SandY - 07.03.2018 в 19:46
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any global rating updates ? |
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Написал S.anDrew 23.03.2017 at 01:00
Космос,космос.... как же мне нравится все связанное с ним, вот что то в этом есть... возможно это из-за его недосягаемости и не постижимой таинственности, миллиардов лет истории всего существования как на Земле, так и за ее пределами... (а быть может и просто матрица но круто проработанная) Трек вообще "огонь" просто!!!! Оригинально вышло и конечно же респект автору за 3д и собественный контент!!! zodeditz The public demands continuation!!!)))Thanks and good luck!!!
yeah buddy i will do soo, the next video will be much longer |
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Написал S.anDrew 23.03.2017 at 01:00
Космос,космос.... как же мне нравится все связанное с ним, вот что то в этом есть... возможно это из-за его недосягаемости и не постижимой таинственности, миллиардов лет истории всего существования как на Земле, так и за ее пределами... (а быть может и просто матрица но круто проработанная) Трек вообще "огонь" просто!!!! Оригинально вышло и конечно же респект автору за 3д и собественный контент!!! zodeditz The public demands continuation!!!)))Thanks and good luck!!!
yeah buddy i will do soo, the next video will be much longer |
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XDuo - 15.05.2017 в 00:41
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Woow This is amaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaazing Animation ♥ |
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Написал strangemanedits 14.04.2017 at 21:52
Damn,man.It's so sick  Very beautiful animation!!!Why I'm cryin after watching?
lol why are you crying ? |
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Написал VinceRage 06.05.2017 at 17:25
Написал zodeditz 06.05.2017 at 17:25
to be honest i didn't understand would you please explain in English ?
At 0:22 I see the inscription on black screen, then four nature scenes. By the way it's not necessarily to change them at every bit. The next scene (dark water) is out of step. It strikes the eye. The inscription at 0:44 distracts because you expect something epic but nothing serious happens next. The "present" inscription in the middle of the clip is too late. You should better put it at the beginning of the clip or lengthen the clip. The scene at 0:58 for some reason is blurry and its quality differs from the video. 1:16 - the text again (this time the background is white). It breaks my expectation. Subconsciously I did not expect this. Therefore I'm in confusion. The blinking dot (with the voice background) is a bit clumsy. It would be better if you use waves for example. I think it's in your power to make it much cooler. The next scenes are interesting, but still I prefer less statics and more dynamics. Defocuses at 1:50 are needless. The next text on the background is good but too long. In general it was the post of criticism.
In the whole I like the clip. Using your own footage commands respect. It remains to work on its presentation. Yep, this video is a short VFX, not a full clip. Good luck in next projects 
- First of all, Thanks so much for your feedback you did really point some interesting things BUT let me clarify things for you, don't get me wrong but it's just to explain nothing else :
I really want to explain but the description says everyhting from scratch, every single sequence you see there has its own role and it's in the right place ... you just need to understand what i wrote in description about the story of this short visuals clip and that part with the circle with blur was the only mistake here but also it has its own role as complete darkness the emptiness of space ... what am saying was also said by one of the guys whom was apart of suicide squad and i've got many feed back from professional people in this industry and style of visuals so i just dunno, if i take all the thing you said and apply them we'll have a video without a soul nor a storyline to follow
let's talk about using waves, what kind of waves ? Spacial waves or gravitational waves ? there's already the waves in a scene from 2nd phase of the video that blurry dot was like a sound coming ut of nowhere and a sign of emptiness it was a mistake because in space the voice can not reach you so yea ...
about Dynamique moves i don't think the song fits this i prefer controling the pace of the song than the song controling what i do, tho in space everything GOES SLOOOOOOOOWLY and i had to use the same movements of planets n stars in reality and put eem there doing dynamique scenes is easy but i had a pretty hard time with these kind of static scenes the slow animation is way harder mhm google was a great help for informations on how the planet moves in reality, science documentaries and so just to gie you this result, there's a Video Called Epoch i think if you watched that one you'll dislike it but nah it was a pure art SLOWING the animation is one kind of hard hting th i tried to do something unique for this contest non had have ever done this style so i am Proud to do so it's Historical for me and thnks bro for the feed back . |
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Написал zodeditz 05.05.2017 at 12:08
to be honest i didn't understand would you please explain in English ?
At 0:22 I see the inscription on black screen, then four nature scenes. By the way it's not necessarily to change them at every bit. The next scene (dark water) is out of step. It strikes the eye. The inscription at 0:44 distracts because you expect something epic but nothing serious happens next. The "present" inscription in the middle of the clip is too late. You should better put it at the beginning of the clip or lengthen the clip. The scene at 0:58 for some reason is blurry and its quality differs from the video. 1:16 - the text again (this time the background is white). It breaks my expectation. Subconsciously I did not expect this. Therefore I'm in confusion. The blinking dot (with the voice background) is a bit clumsy. It would be better if you use waves for example. I think it's in your power to make it much cooler. The next scenes are interesting, but still I prefer less statics and more dynamics. Defocuses at 1:50 are needless. The next text on the background is good but too long. In general it was the post of criticism.
In the whole I like the clip. Using your own footage commands respect. It remains to work on its presentation. Yep, this video is a short VFX, not a full clip. Good luck in next projects |
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Great style, great music, great content. But it real not standart music video, not for everyone. I like ) |
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Написал UFец 26.03.2017 at 07:39
Nice meditative intro and good middle part. Titles in the corner are a bit distracting. Overall interesting space exploring concept that differs from other music videos.
Well thanks, tho it isn't an intro, its finished like i mean i couldn't do more things because in terms of video making you shouldn't bore others with repetitive vids or techniques, that's why i had to give the video that open end when you reach the black hole use your imagination and i made that black hole like a portal but i won't show again the planet 2.0 but yeah audience has to understand these things easily ..; but yeah as you said i changed the style of this contest a bit and came up with a new styl since this is what creacon needs creativity and originality
Написал VinceRage 26.03.2017 at 07:39
0.22 надпись на черном. потом четыре крупных плана с природой. не обязательно кстати их менять под каждый бит. потом мертвое болото - не в тему. режет глаз. 0.44 надпись. эта надпись отвлекает в итоге. почему? потому что потом почти ничего не произойдет. на середине клипа "present". надо либо в начале, либо клип удлинять. момент на 0.58 - почему-то все размыто. качество картинки выделяется из видеоряда. 1.16 - снова текст. но уже белый фон. это ломает мое восприятие. подсознательно не этого я ожидал. поэтому в замешательстве. точка с голосом - немного топорно. уж лучше волны что ли. думаю в твоих силах сделать куда круче. потом интересные кадры. но все же хочется меньше статики и больше движений в кадре. расфокусы на 1.50 лишние. потом. текст на фоне - это хорошо. но долго - это плохо. в общем, что был пост критики.
с целом видео понравилось. вызывает уважение, когда автор использует собственный футаж. остается поработать над его подачей. это действительно shortVFX. полноценным клипом назвать сложно.
to be honest i didn't understand would you please explain in English ? |
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0.22 надпись на черном. потом четыре крупных плана с природой. не обязательно кстати их менять под каждый бит. потом мертвое болото - не в тему. режет глаз. 0.44 надпись. эта надпись отвлекает в итоге. почему? потому что потом почти ничего не произойдет. на середине клипа "present". надо либо в начале, либо клип удлинять. момент на 0.58 - почему-то все размыто. качество картинки выделяется из видеоряда. 1.16 - снова текст. но уже белый фон. это ломает мое восприятие. подсознательно не этого я ожидал. поэтому в замешательстве. точка с голосом - немного топорно. уж лучше волны что ли. думаю в твоих силах сделать куда круче. потом интересные кадры. но все же хочется меньше статики и больше движений в кадре. расфокусы на 1.50 лишние. потом. текст на фоне - это хорошо. но долго - это плохо. в общем, что был пост критики.
с целом видео понравилось. вызывает уважение, когда автор использует собственный футаж. остается поработать над его подачей. это действительно shortVFX. полноценным клипом назвать сложно. |
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so amazing .. really loved it <3 |
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Damn,man.It's so sick Very beautiful animation!!!Why I'm cryin after watching? |
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Написал Madfield 07.04.2017 at 22:11
Наивысший балл. Стильно, завораживает, интригует. Но прекраснее всего то, что сделана вся эта красота ручками самого автора. Чистое творчество, только оно по-настоящему вдохновляет и достойно самой большой похвалы. Браво, zodeditz!
Thanks |
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Наивысший балл. Стильно, завораживает, интригует. Но прекраснее всего то, что сделана вся эта красота ручками самого автора. Чистое творчество, только оно по-настоящему вдохновляет и достойно самой большой похвалы. Браво, zodeditz! |
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UFец - 26.03.2017 в 07:39
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Nice meditative intro and good middle part. Titles in the corner are a bit distracting. Overall interesting space exploring concept that differs from other music videos. |
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Космос,космос.... как же мне нравится все связанное с ним, вот что то в этом есть... возможно это из-за его недосягаемости и не постижимой таинственности, миллиардов лет истории всего существования как на Земле, так и за ее пределами... (а быть может и просто матрица но круто проработанная) Трек вообще "огонь" просто!!!! Оригинально вышло и конечно же респект автору за 3д и собественный контент!!! zodeditz The public demands continuation!!!)))Thanks and good luck!!! |
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KVANT - 17.03.2017 в 22:31
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Хм... любопытненько, с некоторыми оттенками медитативности.
Как по мне не хватает некоторой развернутости и сцепленности элементов, а то немножко слайд-шоу получилось.
Концепт Я так и не уловил... |
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Написал t0m1k 12.03.2017 at 23:51
Написал zodeditz 12.03.2017 at 23:51
Okay Hello, First thank you for your comment and don't worry your English is good i can understand you don't worry friend
well in video making colors refers to alot of things and i had to use them properly here to give that atmospheric look and feeling to the video, this video is about Creation and it focuses on Planet Eart 2.0 that was found last year so i had to make the first part more Longer and well made that people can understand that our Location now was at Earth 2.0 means i am showing that it simillar to our Planet just our planet has Life while the other one doesn't have it, after that i did show that we are at earth now 26 Million years ago at earth the rocket was Launched for this achievement and then i did show what the rocket had to encounter Easy peasy also the song is slow so i have to sync it in a good way i can not do fast animation while the song is slow so i could make other satisfied nah and also in space everyhting moves Slowly soi had to do that but i respect your opinion tell me if you did understand the idea now or no and thanks again ^^
Well, I'm glad that you managed to understand me. Yeah, now I see the whole picture, and I can say that my comment about colors is excess. But moment on 1:20 still could be more interesting and more technically original. I hope we will see more your works here. Goodluck !
Well thank you just chekc my youtube i'll be posting more content like this more |
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Хорошая зарисовка, интересная идея, отличная музыка, но слишком коротко, особенно не хватило второй части клипа. Круто что все исходники делал сам автор, но итоговый компоуз мне далеко не везде понравился. Много слабо проработанных или плохо сочетающихся друг с другом элементов. И хотелось большей динамики и движения в кадре. Но в целом, как тут уже отметили, работа смотрится крайне необычно и свежо на этом конкурсе и вообще на ресурсе. |
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t0m1k - 12.03.2017 в 23:51
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Написал zodeditz 12.03.2017 at 23:06
Okay Hello, First thank you for your comment and don't worry your English is good i can understand you don't worry friend
well in video making colors refers to alot of things and i had to use them properly here to give that atmospheric look and feeling to the video, this video is about Creation and it focuses on Planet Eart 2.0 that was found last year so i had to make the first part more Longer and well made that people can understand that our Location now was at Earth 2.0 means i am showing that it simillar to our Planet just our planet has Life while the other one doesn't have it, after that i did show that we are at earth now 26 Million years ago at earth the rocket was Launched for this achievement and then i did show what the rocket had to encounter Easy peasy also the song is slow so i have to sync it in a good way i can not do fast animation while the song is slow so i could make other satisfied nah and also in space everyhting moves Slowly soi had to do that but i respect your opinion tell me if you did understand the idea now or no and thanks again ^^
Well, I'm glad that you managed to understand me. Yeah, now I see the whole picture, and I can say that my comment about colors is excess. But moment on 1:20 still could be more interesting and more technically original. I hope we will see more your works here. Goodluck ! |
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Написал t0m1k 11.03.2017 at 21:48
Well, when i watched this clip for the first time, I was a bit lost... don't know why... Maybe because I didn't expect to see clip like this one. So, SURPRISE MOTHERLOVER ! )
MV is good, hypnotizing music with calm and beautiful video. Yeah, that's great that everything here were made by yourself, it's also big advantage of this clip. Really like font of the text, and simple but nice lower thirds.
But for me weren't really clear moments with colors. After really bright and colorful pictures of nature (with slow part of soundtrack) you show us space, planets, galactics etc. And here we don't see anything also so colorful and alive (sometimes we see just white asteroids on black BG) and it's not good for me. I wanted to see bigger variety of colors at the 2'nd part of this clip. Moment on 1:20 also wasn't good for me. As I understood, you tried to synchronize glow of circle with vocal, but i think it's a bit hack-work. You could create somethin more interesting then just a grey circle.
That's all, I think. Thank you for your clip and sorry for my ENG.
Okay Hello, First thank you for your comment and don't worry your English is good i can understand you don't worry friend
well in video making colors refers to alot of things and i had to use them properly here to give that atmospheric look and feeling to the video, this video is about Creation and it focuses on Planet Eart 2.0 that was found last year so i had to make the first part more Longer and well made that people can understand that our Location now was at Earth 2.0 means i am showing that it simillar to our Planet just our planet has Life while the other one doesn't have it, after that i did show that we are at earth now 26 Million years ago at earth the rocket was Launched for this achievement and then i did show what the rocket had to encounter Easy peasy also the song is slow so i have to sync it in a good way i can not do fast animation while the song is slow so i could make other satisfied nah and also in space everyhting moves Slowly soi had to do that but i respect your opinion tell me if you did understand the idea now or no and thanks again ^^ |
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Написал Samuel 12.03.2017 at 18:19
Довольно красиво, хоть и местами топорно реализовано.
Выглядит как тизер-трейлер (или даже концепт-арт) к чему-то полновесному.
Но, конечно, атмосферно и креативно.
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Pretty nice vid, but not without cons in visual realization.
Looks like teaser-trailer (or even concept art) to something bigger.
But atmospheric and creative, ofc.
Well not really, the video it self is Finished fact that it's not being deep doesn't mean it's no finished i had to make sure to make the journey a little bit short because all i wanted to show it that Earth 2.0 may look simillar to our Planet this is why the first part is a bit longer, i find it none sens to make the cosmetic encounters more long because a lot of things would be repeated. in VFX we call this Short VFX Movie thanks for your comment ^^ |
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Sham - 12.03.2017 в 22:39
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Не обычно,понравилось. |
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позалипала славно :3 смотрится здорово (: |
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Довольно красиво, хоть и местами топорно реализовано.
Выглядит как тизер-трейлер (или даже концепт-арт) к чему-то полновесному.
Но, конечно, атмосферно и креативно.
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Pretty nice vid, but not without cons in visual realization.
Looks like teaser-trailer (or even concept art) to something bigger.
But atmospheric and creative, ofc. |
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А мне не понравилось, в целом. Оригинален? Да. Необычен? Да. Непонятен? Да. Но не интересен.  |
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zodeditz, я не хотел тебя обидеть, ты просто не так истолковал мои слова. Клип мне понравился еще больше, когда в описании я прочитал, что материал был сделан лично автором. |
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I really liked the atmosphere. GJ & GL |
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